Tuesday, September 22, 2009

The Water The Sand And Your Lips Comments

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we walked
hand in hand
in the sand
to the edge
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Bryan Alexander
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Kari Alexander 03 February 2010

soft, sweet and lulling this poem pulls you like the tide that's written about. beautiful work!

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Janell Cressman 22 September 2009

this is GOOD! ! ! ! ! ! I love how it doen't seem like the wait of the world is resting on your shoulders, I love how carefree this poem is. look forward to more light carefree poems

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Bryan Alexander

Bryan Alexander

Wickliffe, Ohio
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