The Water In My Tea Comments

OH! i should have written Katona, Laszlo, as both you and Laszlo are L. Katonas. :)

any relative named Stephen? any sister/daughter named Lora? how about the L. Katona on PH? Apropos [a word i may never have used...ever before] to this poem, i found the FLOW to be sparklingly clear in this poem. so good, that i might have written it! ! ! fine rhyming as well. well, I’ve never given much thought to water (vapor) moving around, but it seems reasonable that when it rains hard, the water flows down the gutters; gravity and fluidity. Evaporation I’m glad to know the yellow snow …, that made my snowman blond, has perhaps been cleansed of its … “color”……, before it ends up … in the pond. And if, in the pond, there still is pee, then I truly hope and pray …. that before the water ends up in my tea … the yellow’s gone. That’s all I can say. bri :) my favorite stanza: ow this may sound confusing, But it is in fact so true, Because the droplets that have evaporated, Have been thoroughly cleaned for you! to MyPoemList

A subject that need more poems than love deserves, in my opinion. Well written, wonderful sincerity. Please, if I may extend an invitation to read my poem: We Came From Water. It's experimental, of sorts, so it's not that it's a good poem as much as just spitting into the wind. As such, you may find it different enough to be interesting, in the least.

Sophia you're all wet! An AMAZING PO-ET! A+