Sunday, December 14, 2008

The Watchman Comments

Rating: 4.9

As the horses of night billow the surface above,
When the sun shuts the shining shop shutters,
As the weary men sink in the wool of the hearth,
Than the dreary watchman’s wooden staff, silence shatters!
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Rajesh Kumar Vaid
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Sathyanarayana M V S 27 December 2008

a great tribute to night watchmen. U covered all facets of the concept so well....You have well proved that a poet sees what an ordinary person cannot see........(what even Sun cannot see, a poet sees- a Telugu proverb)

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Reshma Ramesh 23 December 2008

yeah....who would have thought about this...........well penned

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 23 December 2008

As watchman guards with vigil we can sleep without sleeping pill Good Work.................... Totally New Idea

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Yes, a watchman has to watch, just like a poet. Words woven in beautifully and skilfully. Karin Anderson

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This is a deep poem nice job and great piece krista

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 December 2008

A well worthy tribute to Watchman...........where ever they would be.The way you penned it was brilliant.Keep writin Rajesh.

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C T Heart 16 December 2008

A fabulous poetic narration of the watchman. A thought provoking composition that hides the message in the beauty of deep poetry... Not many poets could write such kind of poetic expression...I salute to you 10/10.

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Ency Bearis 16 December 2008

great narrative write..a simile verses..10 Ency Bearis

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