Monday, August 12, 2013

The Watcher Comments

Rating: 5.0

Standing in the shadows
just out of sight
stands a watcher
watching your every move
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Dave Alan Walker
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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2013

I can see all fantastic comments below..God's watching you as he is the creator and destroyer of evil too. Beautiful write...Enjoyed reading it.

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Kevin Halls 13 August 2013

Hows the saying go again: Just because your Paranoid doesn't mean they won't get you! Like the theme of your two poems.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 August 2013

Watching and being watched are mutual. Who is watching who? Beautiful poem.

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Poetheart Morgan 13 August 2013

Full of meanings that poem. He could be the watcher of our souls. Very good poem! ! !

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 August 2013

watch out....for you're watched! great write, Dave, on a unique theme.

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 August 2013

very nice.there is enjoyment being a watcher.liked the way you put it.

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

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