The Wasteland! Comments

I was amazed to read this poem of yours this morning. I thought I could relate to this poem. Positive depiction of negative feelings, well done!

Positive depiction of negative feelings, well done!

these are fruits of aimless life -some fruits are for food but all for seeding hope, green land joyless days and sleepless night -you can change to sleep of joy in a day and wake the dream at night I live, like a wingless bird, -Penguin has wings but cant fly, so life is to accept who we are useless life in lawless world -there's no world without law, because life follow the nature law t' strictly fall in loveless passion 'tis still new trend of fashion -ask your soul to find which trend you like to follow like screaming silence here n there hopelessness is everywhere... -but dont deny that hopeful also many out there lo! the thought in thoughtless silence feel the pain in painless violence -if it painless violence turn pain, stop the violence anyhow that is too much i'm bearing may God save me from this suffering... -Only God will deliver your soul to best living, ask Him Nice heart speaking Shahzia_Unwritten Soul

that is too much you're bearing anything can save you from this suffering?