When the light is afar, and darkness near
The human mind is not averse to fear
The clouds of terror block out the safe sky
And roar ominously with an evil eye
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well, though i LOVE this, i'll try to be as critical as possible....OK?
the thing is: why must the warrior be just fighting the same old Good v/s Evil War? ?
the demons of his own mind....the struggle with his own conscience, the grappling and gambling with fate...you know...
the country needs to be aware that it ain't a Mono-Saviour that can do the job...it's all of us, who got to get up together and do it...the notion of a Warrior wading his way through his enemies' blood, and stuff like that gets somewhat Macbethian, don't you think? why don't you remove your warrior from this structure of Good and Evil...? ?
but, whatever,1st reading reaction...i really LOVED it! ! !
=])
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well, though i LOVE this, i'll try to be as critical as possible....OK? the thing is: why must the warrior be just fighting the same old Good v/s Evil War? ? the demons of his own mind....the struggle with his own conscience, the grappling and gambling with fate...you know... the country needs to be aware that it ain't a Mono-Saviour that can do the job...it's all of us, who got to get up together and do it...the notion of a Warrior wading his way through his enemies' blood, and stuff like that gets somewhat Macbethian, don't you think? why don't you remove your warrior from this structure of Good and Evil...? ? but, whatever,1st reading reaction...i really LOVED it! ! ! =])