Tuesday, December 16, 2008

The War Within (Myfirst Set Of Lyrics) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feelings left behind,
memories a pain
the future left blind,
hopes fade behind the stains.
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Stacy Bea
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Janri Gogeshvili 16 December 2008

'We all fight we all have dreams we all feel pain we all feel alone' Impressionable... Instigator...

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Samuel Pennell 16 December 2008

Stacy-this is terrific! I love the repitition, and the subtle changes in meaning-terrific! I love how it funnels down to the finish, I really enjoyed this please check out my poems! Samuel Stuart Pennell

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