There's a war within me
As though, someone threw a bomb onto my heart
And my brain has melted when you left
All I see is the turmoil of the aftermath
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LeeAnn, I can really feel your pain. So very well expressed in this heart wrenching poem.
This is such a sad and moving poem, delving the chaos and heartbreak of grief, with heartfelt emotion.
Great poem, LeeAnn. I also wanted to leave a comment on your newest one but couldn't see a place to do it.
In paradise waiting.......so wonderful LeeAnn. God bless........10
I had posted here my observations on the poem, yesterday. But now I find it missing! ! What shall we do, dear poets?
A loveliest thought-provoking poem,5 Stars full on TOP! .Excellent poem, dear LeeAnn
So intensely felt! True feelings expressed in a way that we know, they will never change or die. Being able to express them, sometimes helps
It is an awful dilemma you face with no easy answer. Tina and I talked before she died and she said I should find someone else.
Brilliantly said about the war of words in your heart that melted your brain and also destroyed the stomav