Saturday, February 19, 2022

The War Within Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

There's a war within me
As though, someone threw a bomb onto my heart
And my brain has melted when you left
All I see is the turmoil of the aftermath
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Nabakishore Dash 31 August 2022

Brilliantly said about the war of words in your heart that melted your brain and also destroyed the stomav

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Maria Mitea 27 August 2022

Fabulous work! It goes right the way in my favorites!

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Anjandev Roy 25 August 2022

That no tears can quench......excellent...

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Michael Cochrane 23 July 2022

Heartfelt, poem, from the heart.

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Richard Wlodarski 05 May 2022

LeeAnn, I can really feel your pain. So very well expressed in this heart wrenching poem.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 February 2022

This is such a sad and moving poem, delving the chaos and heartbreak of grief, with heartfelt emotion.

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Belle Wassermeister 22 February 2022

Great poem, LeeAnn. I also wanted to leave a comment on your newest one but couldn't see a place to do it.

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Kim Barney 22 February 2022

Very well written, LeeAnn. I give it five stars.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 21 February 2022

In paradise waiting.......so wonderful LeeAnn. God bless........10

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Earnest Gatuma 21 February 2022

Peace on our departed

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Earnest Gatuma 21 February 2022

Peace on our departed.

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 February 2022

I had posted here my observations on the poem, yesterday. But now I find it missing! ! What shall we do, dear poets?

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 20 February 2022

Very positive poem. Liked the tone and flow.5****

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 February 2022

A loveliest thought-provoking poem,5 Stars full on TOP! .Excellent poem, dear LeeAnn

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Anjandev Roy 19 February 2022

Magnificent piece.....thanks for sharing......

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Sandra Feldman 19 February 2022

So intensely felt! True feelings expressed in a way that we know, they will never change or die. Being able to express them, sometimes helps

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soren Barrett 19 February 2022

A wonderful write of inner feelings and struggle

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David Wood 19 February 2022

It is an awful dilemma you face with no easy answer. Tina and I talked before she died and she said I should find someone else.

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 February 2022

Very forceful poem. Facing a turmoil from within….

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Jayne Davies 19 February 2022

So touching LeeAnn x

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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