Tuesday, November 20, 2012

The War Within Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep inside the most desolate regions of my mind, I sit in an open field
This domain is my inner sanctuary, where I can go and be one with my thoughts
Sitting in the middle of a field of vibrant colorful flowers all around, bird making sweet sounds
It is truly a happy place meant for the gods, then something happen that was pretty odd
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Murasaki Kitsune
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Asif Andalib 23 November 2012

Beautiful magic-realistic imagery. I like it

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 November 2012

Interesting narrative poem with take on mythical ref. Enjoyd yor war within.

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Murasaki Kitsune

Murasaki Kitsune

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