Thursday, June 16, 2016

The War Rages On Inside Of My Head Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cry tears with no one to see
That all is dead inside of me

They burn as they roll down my cheeks
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Noah Body
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Lyn Paul 14 May 2018

You give an incredible insight on this health issue. The respect I have for you Tony and the want for your happiness I cannot express enough. May good things come to you.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 September 2016

Awesome rhyming pair matches here ESP cheeks n streaks and beast feast. Somehow I could relate this poem to my dominating hubby except the screaming part. This poem is lyrical n emotive and so powerful n deep n soulful and I rate it a tour de force masterpiece. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse too.

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