The War Mongers Comments

You seem like a wise person. Someone who has experienced both sides of many cases. I like this. 9 hours ago by lydia molinaro to The war mongers

welcome stuti nayak 19 secs · Unlike · 1

Hasmukh Mehta welcome Maricela Ramírez, Shujat Ahmad 2 secs · Unlike · 1

Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 2 hrs · Unlike · 1

Brilliant! Paul Woodward15 minutes ago I absolutely love this. Says so much and I love the word arrangement! Comment +1

:) Aspen-Skye Lee17 minutes ago This is pretty good. Took me personally to understand what it was about -forgot to read title- then I figured it out through the poem. ^_^ Comment +1

No flow Clint Miller18 minutes ago Too many grammatical errors and there is no flow. The analogies are ok. Give it some structure.

Lisa Lombardi likes this. Lisa Lombardi Let us not become habitual The bad habits sometimes remain not casual They surface with strong urge It will be then difficult to purge... Nice! ! ! 4 mins · Unlike · 1

good writing sir, I like it. Let us not become habitual, thanks.

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