Friday, January 3, 2020

The War In Heaven...Complete Version Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the golden fields of Heaven,
In the shade of immortal white towers.
By life's clear river dwelling,
And amid undying flowers.
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Shaun Cronick
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Shaun Cronick 02 August 2020

This needs to rewritten and expanded to lay a foundation for the upcoming The End of Days: The Battle of Megiddo. Archangel Trilogy Part 3. Concerning Lucifer, and Archangels Michael, Gabriel and Azeal.

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Soran M. H 03 January 2020

very creative idea found in the poem, some times the imagination bird flying so far, and landing after a while with a lovely gift, really always you have got many rich sources of inspiration, and it tell us how you are a knowledgeable poet with strong and powerful language...very good and thanks for this gift 10/10

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Shaun Cronick 23 January 2020

Thank you Soran for reading it and your gracious comment. I welcome your moral support anytime and your latest poem Travels is simply breath-taking and timeless, It reveals a true poets warm heart and feelings. Thank you Soran my good friend and take care. Your friend Shaun.

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