The War In Heaven...Archangel Trilogy Part 1 Comments
On the golden fields of Heaven,
In the shade of immortal white towers.
By life's clear river dwelling,
And amid undying flowers.
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A one of a kind write from a one of a kind Poet. It takes a great skill and talent to write a long beautiful poem. Another poetic gem, Shaun. Your pen is indeed amazing!
I know there are two versions of this. The second one being over twice as long. But, to tie in with forthcoming Archangel Trilogy Part 3, End Of Days: The Battle Of Megiddo. Even that longer second version will have to rewritten and expanded more.
Thank you once again Bryony you are so kind and generous I have next week off to upload the complete version of this and the complete mammoth version of It Knows What Scares You and a third and final version of Miss Goody Two Shoes who you and my family members enjoyed so much. Hang in there Bryony and many, many thanks for your gracious and uplifting moral support through-out this year. Take care. Your friend, Shaun.
Dear great poet shaun, it is brilliant poem as usual, with very strong language and creativity theme and story, that is what we are expecting from you, even this version to me look like perfect.. wish you every success: 10/10 from me... It's been said it never rains in Heaven, But at close of that day it did.
Great, not me good Soran. Mahatma Gandhi and others like him are great and the sadly missed Muhammad Ali is The Greatest.And I thank you for your gracious compliment and comment. I will up the longer version next week, for I have that week off and am looking so forward to it. Time for me after a demanding work is my Nemesis, for there is never enough spare time.It like this poem is a war. Thanks again Soran and take care.
Thank you for your kind and gracious comment sir. Glad you liked it. I will be having some time off work soon and will read your poems. And in that time I will try to put up the complete version of this poem, that version timed out on me. For the complete version is twice as long. If I can upload it, I'll personal message you when upped. Take care and thanks again.
There is a much, much longer version over twice the length of this one. That one kept timing out when typed and trying to upload it. So this version is less than half of the originally written War In Heaven. I will try and put up that longer version which has all of Heaven's Archangels in it and the Archangel Azeal who is a lynchpin for the entire trilogy.
A well written stanza poem. Each stanza contains beautiful verses with great imagery creating a great impact in the mind of a reader. Very engaging write. I am glad I was able to read this wonderful piece giving me more knowledge about angels. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Onto my Poem List.
Thank you for your kind comments Rose Marie. I'm glad a world-class poet as your good self enjoyed it and your superbly crafted poems are poems to lift each and everyone's hearts and spirits. And I thank you again good Rose Marie. Take care.
EXCELLENT write. Very gripping. A vivid portrayal of the war of angels in heaven. It is like watching a biblical movie. Those who have never read about angels will definitely learn from this beautiful write.
Thank you again Rose Marie for you gracious comments. And I will soon put up the full version Of Enchantress with a twist ending you enjoyed so much after reading Miss Goody Two Shoes. Enchantress will wrap up the trilogy of evil poems, which started with She Was There, then Miss Goody Two Shoes. I hope you enjoy it. And I thank you again Rose Marie.
There is a much, much longer version now Rose Marie and I thank you again. Take care.
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Thank you Rose Marie and there is a version twice as long as this one The Complete Version. But even that one will need to be added to for the third and final part The End Of Days: The Battle Of Megiddo. About Lucifer's war on earth between and Heaven. I need to rewrite The Complete Version and insert three extra stanza's to support what's planned for the trilogy's final and brutal part between Archangel Azeal and Lucifer.