The War Comments

this is a very great peom, i can feel the mixed emotions in this.....really great poem...anusha your very talented.

The poem touched me. The last sentence ought to by yelled out!

a great work. well worded and very clever. very vivid and imaginative narrative poem that in each line cries out the final and telling conclusion to the poem and the ugly truths in it it bears as you put it... When they sat wondering, trying hard to remember the cause of the war at first place. It is then they were stuck with the horrible truth: “No animal hunt its own specie. No bird prey on its own kind. And only if humans realize this, will the word war vanish from the world.” only hindsight is 20/20 and even then there is still some blurrs. it doesn't take much for people to find the differences in each other but to ask them to find the similarities, well that it a much harder question. once people are able to see the similarities more than the differences and learn we are all the same in the end war will be a difficult thing to avoid because until we can accept each other there will be no respect for each other. no respect and you will continue to have all types of people warring over who is right or wrong, strong or weak, good or bad or any other reason they can accept in their theart. very prolific poem my friend.10 +++ Jen

.......'And only if humans realize this, will the word war vanish from the world.” I agree. But humans don't seem to learn....they love to learn 'lessons' though...at a very high price. Cheers. Subroto

war is horrible at times when one doesn't care about.... all they do is to destruct....beautiful! keep it up....

anu, the last three lines are true eye-openers..............

Well done, very nice..................

sad but true...we the most civilized ones(as r v called) , are the only ones who hunt their own kind. good poem

lovely...sad truth....we are human divided in race language and nation....the other killng are only physical man kills from his heart