Tuesday, August 14, 2007

The War Comments

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it was jon I was talking
to, when he brought up
vietnam and how he
flew planes back then
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Ben Partenay
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Joseph Daly 14 August 2007

I like this a lot Ben. I don't normally enjoy this lower-case, unpuntuated poetry; I find it lazy. With this I put my bias to one and say that it is a great pleasure to read this. The stanzas are beautifull crafted giving this a wonderful flow.

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Ernestine Northover 14 August 2007

This is an excellent write Ben, so compact that it hits in the right places. The heart and the mind. I found it so expressive. meaningful with that 'life goes on' attitude. Very well written. A very good read indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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