Tuesday, July 28, 2009

The Wantings Comments

Rating: 5.0

The ache to hear you,
The pain to hold you,
The want to touch you.
The tears to see you,
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Jane Z
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Harold K Schreiberg 05 September 2009

When all is said and done there remains It Very nice poem, concise, enigmatic, unexpected, a gem!

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Ted M 28 July 2009

A write with full of emotions.

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Jane Z

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