Nice Effort... I loved the mystic device used in the poem...
But a suggestion: you need to take care of editing and particularly about line before you publish poem...
Best of luck ahead....: -)
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beautifil..beautiful imagination of wandering souls. fighting with evils...living with amgells™ liked ot, thanls for inviting! 10+++