The Wandering Gypsy Comments

A good poem. Very nice comparison.

Ur poem was gud bro...only dat it dearths figures of speech and mostly ryhmes..bt its realy poetic..kip d lyts on. i love it.

welll it's not complement but i'm speechless this poem is very expressive, it anouces the inner of the poet as aimless or lost in the road where no guide is there to follow and reach his goal, this reminds me of a novel i read entiteled the sun also rises by Earnest hemingway in which the major theme is LOSS refering to the Lost Generation, and i like most the metaphores used such as the wandering gypsy and others, this concerning to component, on the other hand, i want to comment on the form which is free versed poem but it contains certain regularity and musical devices and that's what i liked most cause i felt as if reading a lyrical poem. thank you for messaging me. hope you keep me up dated with your news and i hpe also that you have a look at my poems

Nice poem nicely expressed i love it .......... Good luck with your poems Guess WWho

Loved it! ! I totally feel it! ! i even feel like this sometimes.

Excellent! I identify with your journey 100% but in my case it was only a dream that vanished after I woke up! In many ways, I feel like that here in New York City! This a great and well penned write that clearly makes the readers think deeply and compare their own situations to this well described story which is touching! I really like it! 10+++ Your poetic talent will take you to the top of the Poetry World one day! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

Read your poem. Feels like running into walls. Wondering where one should belong? When life isn't always in presence of your song. Especially when your heart aches. And friends seem to be all gone! Running away from the pain that hits you between the eyes. Survival in faith beyond disguise. Rights of passageway's bounty on soul. When I write I learn more about myself and the world that I don't always feel that I belong to. I painted an abstract painting of a banyan tree. It's on my web sight. Such an interesting sacred tree. Help bring out the nature of us human beings. Thanks for inviting me to read your poem. I enjoyed it. Keep on writing and contact me in the future. It's nice to know other writers to be able to relate to. Steven Drake

A really nice poem :)

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As one Russian poet said, They say they cannot risk because they have homes and there is light in their homes. I don`t know who is right. There is a rain for me outside, there is a dinner for them indoors. The same mood is felt in your poem. It`s a good one.

The fatigue of everyday life, the restless life makes one tired of life.Usage of simile is nice.Gypsy here has become the emblem of moving soul. Terrific!

Hey Wandering gypsy that was great poem with Desi music :) I mean i got your gypsy style here, but i would love more if you create more gypsy imagery and acting as a gypsy soul..but the poem was really good, i never read the first version of this poem but this one is cool! ! _Unwritten Soul

beautiful verse... keep writing more

Makes my feet want to move and join the band. Lovely verse.

I agree with sanu... you are a modern man.

I agree, A Beautiful peice of poetry, Freespirit.... Love it, keep it up!

It's really beautiful

Life's fashion has come to standstill My luggage bag cannot hold the cloth hill My loved ones have shoved away Even telecommunication failed to make their way Jumping from place to place like an obidient monkey i feel myself no less than the wandering gypsy REALLY AN AMAZING POEM.....IT IS REALLY WORTHWHILE..

Very good piece of work. Highly descriptive to conjurer a scene. The use of repetition is well used and I particularly liked the obedient monkey line.

Moving around a bit enhances life's experiences and it certainly expands the mind! Gives you more material to write about in the future. Nice poem, keep up the good work!