Monday, August 14, 2006

The Walls Of My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Within the walls of my heart,
I can hold you close...
I can hold you to me...
Where you belong,
...
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Lesa MRK
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Lesa, this is a seriously well-constructed piece. The serenity of the flow brings about just that reassuring feeling of safety that the words convey equally well. Grand. t x

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Grace Hays 14 August 2006

I agree wholeheartedly with Night Hawk.......good job Lesa...........i love it

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Night Hawk 14 August 2006

very well written, the love you hold for someone in your heart holds them there and keeps them safe as well, through anything

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