The Walls Are Crumbling Comments

Dear Mary To find someone in the moment and then truely share your feelings with them unconditionally is such a wonderful thing to happen, This is such a tender poem, Love Duncan

That's a great write Mary. I so need to share this one with someone. Thank you.

Oh Mary I do hope so

Yes Mary, it is very good. The few small stumbles actually contribute to the atmosphere of real life in this poem, making it more human. Best H

Happiness is so beautiful, but so brief! All we have is now! !

Beatiful, Mary. This is either a wish for things to be another way or an actual second chance to change a path on which the narratyor was on. Unpacking the suitcase is a brilliant metaphor, just one of many great sconstructs in this work. Love Denis Joe

Very cool poem...so honest and telling. I think it has a lot to say to whoever it is meant for.

It is always a relief when walls crumble....thanks for sharing.

This is fantastic, so much to feel. Your writing is an inspiration, always so smooth in construction. Thank you for sharing. Kindest Regards Slim. x.

i like it it reminded me of a fight i had with my mom that ended much like this poem. very nive Mary. Lylyanna

This is brilliant Mary. I really like the idea of walls of the crumbling relationship which you explore.

Dear Mary, Your warmth becomes you. This is a lovely poem. Keep up the good work. Sincerely, Sandra