Wednesday, July 1, 2015

The Wallflower Comments

Rating: 4.5

A sad smile broke upon a sensual lips,
Lifted the wine glass, took a few sips,
Tremors shook the gorgeous fingertips,
As the music blinds time as it slips.
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Ellonah Varela
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Chinedu Dike 02 July 2015

A beautiful woman of virtue is man's highest glory. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned with lovely rhyme scheme in poetic diction. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Thanks for the comment!

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Kelly Kurt 01 July 2015

A lovely poem, Ellonah Thanks for sharing Peace

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Thank you for reading my poem!

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