Monday, February 1, 2016

The Wall Comments

Rating: 4.3

There are no words on the wall
It's painted anew
Erasing all old stories
With a dab of fresh color
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Nosheen Irfan
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Anil Pillai 08 December 2016

NO WRITING COME AND SEE.......ITS MOTIVATING NOSHEEN!

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Dutendra Chamling 22 July 2016

...I hold the pen Between my fingers The wall is inviting New words arise in me Waiting to burst out And splash the clean wall Once again, as in past Let's go on and on Writing away... Beautiful....!

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Valsa George 04 February 2016

The slate is clean...... the wall is white washed erasing all that was written earlier.... You have the pen ready! Now script the saga of life, so that others can read and enjoy!

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Akhtar Jawad 04 February 2016

A silent message of wall is more powerful than a write, it can break even a Berlin Wall and on the other hand it can survive for thousands of years like the China wall. The secret of walls is in their foundations.

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M Asim Nehal 01 February 2016

Awesome, motivating and inspiring poem, calling to write on the wall is an open invitation to every poet.10++++

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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