Sunday, August 11, 2013

The Wall Comments

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I waited to see
My reflection in you
My eagerness reached the sky.
As the day passes
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Ashly Raju
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Valsa George 16 August 2013

Walls are there! Such obstructions are undeniable! But never let it prevent you! If you desire to soar high, the entire sky stretches wide before you! Take a leap! The determination and confidence expressed here are so commendable! A powerful write, Ashly! !

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Aswath Raman 14 August 2013

You have given a level of controlled emotion through this lines. When you climb the big eall of pains, you, the successful, witty, bold and confident you should be the reflection in their eyes. A write with immense confidence and extreme passion. Please read the poem Pink written by shreya nair.

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Doug Bentley 13 August 2013

This is a break-through. A definite sense of maturing control, of being able to plumb the inner, then separate, analyze, mold. In the recognition that art is the examination, not expression of self, there is the possibility that on the horizon lies the other as a final release in art.

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