The Wall Comments

you nailed it....nice poem and the composition so nice...Jacqui that was awesome keep more nice work...you know, you are talented, i hope you noticed it now if you not before :) _Unwritten Soul

Sometimes a wall will protect us from all evilness of life, and no one can brake that wall if we build it in our heart, that's the wall of hopes.. A wonderful poem! ! Great write!

Wow. A fantastic poem, with a really good flow. Fantastic write.

The wall others build to protect themselves. This is what I see here. Some are too strong to break, others too tall to climb, but only those that try are gifted with failure.