The Wall Comments
The warmth of your smile
Touches me cold as ice.
They add colour
To lies that deceive me...
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Shutting out all hopes Or anything left behind. Its only the wall...not love That stood the test of time. These lines indicate the despair and hopeless position. We must aim at positive energies.
Thanks for your comment. There are times when there is nothing more left to do...and the best you can try to get over it is write about it and get it out from the heart...which I did.
They add colour To lies that deceive me... Vague promises That never were meant to be... experiences of a love life that leads slowly into despair...... thank u dear poet. tony
Thanks for the comment and appreciation. I am a big fan of your writing too.
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7/24/2025 6:06:46 PM # 1.0.0
A good start with a nice poem, Avik Roy. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.