The Walk Comments

This made my hair stand on end. Lily - you must keep writing...

Theme is excellant.But it could be shorten further. Read repeatedly and think of editing. Do not make poems narrative. Express 2000 words in 100 words.

'You will eventually meet him, Face to face, At the end of the road, In the golden dusk, When it's all too late, Not for me, But for you.' Marvelous.10+

dream still wakes the breath of walks by its resonace inthe dawn of deasire jingle tone echoes across the wild stream lamp post wishes the love even if ignored.....yet ingenious as when wrought by the luscious green,10+, thanks for sharing

a vivid imagery nicely narrated...well written.. Ency Bearis

Great use of a poet; s imagination.

my heart is with u Lily i am really touched and moved by this poem...by the way i have a niece called Lily and i love that cute angel''

You'll never walk alone Lily...remember that always! ! !

Absolutely stunning! Well done!

Ammmmmazing! emitted spectrum is really thoughtfull! ........10

i'm not ready to face that hooded man by the lamp post. he can wait for a while. your poems makes me think in different spectrum. not scary... very nice poem.thanks. a 10 for you

Lots of content. leaves you wondering. well done.

That is one spooky poem