Friday, October 9, 2009

The Waiting Rhyme Comments

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No lull, not even a loving pull,
this whisky bottle no more full.
Still I am awake staring,
waiting for you, the caring.
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Patti Masterman 09 October 2009

I like this very much; the words, the rhyming, the flow and the title which drew me to it in the first place..(smile)

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