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The windscreen wipers worked at such a pace,
Large raindrops, heavy, thrown down by the storm,
No distance could you see, all was a blur,
No shape of tree or house, there was no form.
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nice and so much fun to read......enjoyed this very much.... please read my poems and leave your opinion
I love the way you vividly describe these scenes of nature. Your decision to give no regular rhyme shows how unplanned but interesting the scenes are. Great effort for this one!
This wonderful poem reflects that reality around us. Thanks.
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7/23/2025 6:22:17 AM # 1.0.0
striking like a cobra! what a wonderful imagery you have talent enrnestine!