Thursday, April 17, 2008

The Waiting Game Comments

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Now we both stand at the edge of this cliff,
Pretending happy, who'll fall?
Pretending strong, our hearts will not drift,
Now we both don't know nothing at all,
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Geovanni Leaño
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 18 April 2008

Ganni, i really appreciate this one...very well-written... i remember a novel when i read the title...mmm...extraordinarily wonderful...what more can i say?

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Estrella Baldemosa 17 April 2008

is this one of those ' i'll dump you before you dump me' syndromes? effective poem...keep on writing.

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Geovanni Leaño

Geovanni Leaño

Zamboanga City
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