Friday, January 18, 2008

The Waiting Comments

Rating: 5.0

I had been waiting
Night after night
Until my tears had
Almost dimmed my sight
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Rani Turton
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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 September 2008

Lovely emotional composition, love it.10 for it.

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Abha Sharma 25 March 2008

very emotional and deep.... hope tears will not be there with anyone to dim the sight.

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Tsira Goge 21 March 2008

Rani, It is fine emotional expectations...Best wishes... Tsira

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A desire leads to a journey, it's destiny. Emotional read, thank you for posting it.

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Broken Peaces 20 January 2008

Sometimes Rani we have to make the first move, lovely write may your wish come true and hope he is deserving of you 10 Chris

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