Thursday, August 13, 2009

The Wait Comments

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Another day I have to wake with out you by my side.
My heart crushing of the hurt. Crushing of the lies.
The thirst and hunger taking over me. Limb by limb.
With out you, this life is a battle I would dream to win.
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Such heartfelt and passionate writing and you have poured out your feelings with such honesty. Thank goodness for writing, as it is a great tool to get us through life. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

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Rita Guembes 13 August 2009

I...(and everyone who's waiting for someone) ...feel very much like what's described in ur poem. unbearable, isnt it?

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