Monday, February 6, 2012

The Wait... Comments

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Each Second; an hour,
waiting. Constantly waiting.
For you.
Can't you see I'm shaking, quaking?
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Bethany Louise Chipperfield
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Patrick Ladbrooke 06 November 2014

Dark, stark poem paints a despairing picture. Well composed. I suppose not all poems can have an uplift for the soul. Good choice of words to paint the picture.

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Bethany Louise Chipperfield

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