Friday, June 11, 2010

The Wait Comments

Rating: 5.0

The deep blue, I`m falling through,
Remaining vigilant, I wait for you.
The kiss that lingers beyond it`s time
Has found its solace within my mind.
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Brandi Guthrie
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Dale Mullock 19 June 2010

Brandi four tens in a row from me, you are on fire! Never let them use an extinguiser on you though, keep the fires burning! Another sincerely sweet poem with a great yearning back dropp and lovely ending that bring such a brilliant end to a climaxed crescendo. You have excellent skill here in building it all up and such a wonderful end delivery... make you want to find a pillow and snuggle up to it and let the pleasurable dreams engulf you. Again superb penning and a masterstroke of an idea all wrapped up in some the tenderest thoughts imaginable. Bravo Brandi... you keep on going gal! Dale :)

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