Thursday, June 25, 2015

The Wail Of A Love Letter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Carrying the fever and heat
Of love’s first flame
I set out on a journey
Expectant and anxious,
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 March 2020

One of the most moving and deeply poignant write I have ever read. Very creative and highly imaginative and the title is indeed one of a kind. A product of a brilliant mind. A very touching write. So beautifully penned. Onto my Poem List.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2018

Carrying the fever and heat Of love’s first flame I set out on a journey Expectant and anxious, Sealed and tight lipped All emotions bottled.......marvelous beginning with touching expression. It is really a beautiful poem on love and loss having nice theme. Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 30 December 2017

Temperamental and whimsical nature of love are aptly captured in the poem. An impressive write that resonates with reality of heartbreak. Well conceived and elegantly penned. Thanks for sharing Valsa.

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Sochukwu Ivye 02 October 2017

You're phenomenal, my poetess. You may not know what reading you does to me, each time. Happy is my young soul interacting with one of the best poets of my time. More grace, Valsa.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 28 June 2015

Oh No! Love hurts always... But Love always wins too. Love teaches us so many things. It is better to have loved and lost than not to have loved at all. I truly believe this. You have captivated Love in the form of a ship, taken it to the sky, wound it in the wind, rolled it on earth, and entwined it in the soul. very beautiful!

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Lyn Paul 27 June 2015

So well written and a love story without a happy ending. Thank You

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Great imagination, Valsaji. The sojourn of a closed love letter to final rejection. The firmament tattooed by glittering stars wouldn't sure mock at its fate but only grieve and shed tears. (10)

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Kavya . 26 June 2015

u have pictured an enveloped letter into a beautiful poem and the emotions that are carried along with by the messenger...very very nicely written.

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Kelly Kurt 25 June 2015

You write with a passion and knowledge that imparts, inspires and entertains. Thank you for sharing, Valsa. Peace

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Rajesh Thankappan 25 June 2015

Sometimes life plays a cruel joke and when we unwrap the beautiful wrapper of our expectations the content inside go up in smoke! Enjoyed the vivid description and the rich imagery of this poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 25 June 2015

An amazing poem............................10

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 June 2015

Of love's first flame. Nice work with the muse of love.

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