Carrying the fever and heat
Of love’s first flame
I set out on a journey
Expectant and anxious,
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Carrying the fever and heat Of love’s first flame I set out on a journey Expectant and anxious, Sealed and tight lipped All emotions bottled.......marvelous beginning with touching expression. It is really a beautiful poem on love and loss having nice theme. Thanks for sharing.
Temperamental and whimsical nature of love are aptly captured in the poem. An impressive write that resonates with reality of heartbreak. Well conceived and elegantly penned. Thanks for sharing Valsa.
You're phenomenal, my poetess. You may not know what reading you does to me, each time. Happy is my young soul interacting with one of the best poets of my time. More grace, Valsa.
Oh No! Love hurts always... But Love always wins too. Love teaches us so many things. It is better to have loved and lost than not to have loved at all. I truly believe this. You have captivated Love in the form of a ship, taken it to the sky, wound it in the wind, rolled it on earth, and entwined it in the soul. very beautiful!
Great imagination, Valsaji. The sojourn of a closed love letter to final rejection. The firmament tattooed by glittering stars wouldn't sure mock at its fate but only grieve and shed tears. (10)
u have pictured an enveloped letter into a beautiful poem and the emotions that are carried along with by the messenger...very very nicely written.
You write with a passion and knowledge that imparts, inspires and entertains. Thank you for sharing, Valsa. Peace
Sometimes life plays a cruel joke and when we unwrap the beautiful wrapper of our expectations the content inside go up in smoke! Enjoyed the vivid description and the rich imagery of this poem.
One of the most moving and deeply poignant write I have ever read. Very creative and highly imaginative and the title is indeed one of a kind. A product of a brilliant mind. A very touching write. So beautifully penned. Onto my Poem List.