Death constantly knocking on my door
Pay your debt
Give your life
That's the wages of sin
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I no longer believe in Jesus, BUT I think I can assure you that you WILL die a human death SOMEDAY. Maybe it will not be an Eternal Death, but YOU will DIE.
sure every human will die but there's hope for those who are in Christ. there's hope of ETERNAL LIFE AFTER DEATH. that gives my so much JOY and CONFIDENCE AS I SERVE THE LORD. My sins are forgiven, JESUS HAS PAID THE DEBT OF DEATH FOR ME. I AM SAVED ETERNALLY. YOU TOO CAN.
There's no doubt humans die, but I will not die eternally. This gives me so much joy and confidence. JESUS PAID MY DEBT OF SIN AND NOW I AM ETERNALLY SAVED. YOU TOO CAN EXPERIENCE THIS UNDYING LOVE OF CHRIST. I'm so happy you took out time to read my poem. I really do appreciate that.
line 6: oops! 'Gripped', I'm sure you meant. Check out your line: 'But I can came his firm yet gentle voice' I suggest proofreading several times, INCLUDING after submitting/publishing on PH. Welcome to PH. ;)
I'd lean towards giving your poem 4 stars, but I see none to give. And, even though I no longer share your religious beliefs, I like your poem. You are NOT a Republican, ARE YOU! ?