Saturday, March 29, 2008

The Vulture Comments

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I stay in the background
Hovering high over the ground
Searching nay for rotten feed
Looking for long forgotten dead
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hamid kareem
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Rani Turton 12 April 2008

The point of view of the vulture is interesting. Its also very subjective, as vultures do have a certain majesty and in urbans areas they arouse much interest. Good poem.

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Aaron Tate 02 April 2008

A vulture never has to worry much about a meal because things constantly die, but yes, the dignity and title you get for being a scavenger, isn't always the best. To be great, without glory is what one could say. Beautiful Write.

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Yonela Mali 31 March 2008

this is a great piece Harim

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