The Voyeur Comments

Chuck, A shaking head, a grin... a great big sigh, a ten again. B.V.A.

Bravo, bravo you dirty boy. Very good indeed.

Admittedly it took a second read to pick up the subtle wordplay in the final stanza - you set the tone well before delivering the punchline -thought this line was rather evocative: 'where she danced a naked torment.' Your poems are becoming more and more diverse Chuck- keep them coming. Justine.

Funny, punchy, and with more than an element of truth... love the perspective. So to speak. Grand, C. t x

Oh, yes, I remember this little number from PIM (shorter version) . Good punning in the last line; I'd never have got that, innocent that I am, hee! A wild and free write with a pinch o' punchy pun!