The Vows Of The Eyes Comments

Fidelity and confidentiality really is what perpetuates a good marriage.Nice work Kanana, very original.

To behold you. Love and dreams. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

sweet for lovers. an eye opener.faithfulness is the key to good relationship

Dear Rose,this is a nice piece for lovers. meant for each other,caring for each other without looking back.touching each others heart with truth and faithfulness.those in love be faithful to the end its the beauty of life

With all rights acknowledged Rose, i will recite this in my wedding day soon. A wonderful piece

Nicely written. No one is perfect, we all make mistakes and if your heart finds a reason to forgive so be it.

these are sweet words expressed in a very simplistic way, a request that lovers yearn for...outer eyes reading inner beauty.Kudos Rose

Words well articulated and very nice piece of work Unfaithful eyes will never meet faithful eyes Allow me to read your eyes Not your voice For me to understand the depth of love through the inner eyes is us For today i take the vow To love, behold and cherish you

in the eyes of a lover truth is never masked.A good piece of work Rose.

Thanks for sharing Rose.This is a well crafted love poem...eyes don't lie a 10 for this