The Vow Comments

the wisdom you have flown In each and every drop of my blood Will be in my body until the sunset Of my life, the confidence, the maturity you provided footprint from sunrise To sunset The source of nectar it will spread Nectar great and loving and living is this great vow. Let your vows and promises come true dear poetess. These points i collected from your poem after reading it carefully. Thank you very much. tony

the wisdom, the confidence, the love you gave, the maturity, the nectar.... that i will spread........ this is a wonderful poem... i went through your poem collecting points........ i like it very much. thank you. tony

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