Monday, February 6, 2012

The Votes Are In Comments

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The votes are in.
It appears as though,
The ones receiving more from life...
Are those not burden,
...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Ace Of Black Hearts 06 February 2012

And such a diversity it is. A mixture of the magic tonic. A formula unmatched by far. A shooting star upon the stage. So fitting and right. The tie must not be too snug, too tight. Let it loosely hang, as if it belongs their. With a sparkle it slivers but still it has so much bite. It is what I like. Love your poem, it has such draw to it.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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