The sounds, incredible hope.
The voices inside my head pauses my thought to a straight stroke.
Am I crazy, can I keep alive?
The voices inside my head tells me to commit suicide.
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I like how this poem goes round in a circle, using the repetition of the voices. The third stanza especially builds up the tension leading up to the ending. Dark and powerful.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings, A poignant bit of verse.