Tuesday, May 10, 2011

The Voices Inside My Head Comments

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The sounds, incredible hope.
The voices inside my head pauses my thought to a straight stroke.
Am I crazy, can I keep alive?
The voices inside my head tells me to commit suicide.
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Chinedu Dike 28 September 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, A poignant bit of verse.

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Emily Oldham 12 July 2012

I like how this poem goes round in a circle, using the repetition of the voices. The third stanza especially builds up the tension leading up to the ending. Dark and powerful.

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