Saturday, June 20, 2015

The Voice Of My Nightingale Comments

Rating: 4.3

I hear the voice of zeal
I hear when you gulped the sun
I hear trumpets' call to heal
I hear the voice of your run
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Kpekot Egweteng
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Chinedu Dike 26 June 2015

A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned in Shakespearean sonnet rhyme scheme. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Oluwatomiwo Akinyemi 23 June 2015

this is a wonderful rhyming scheme. well patterned. keep it up.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 21 June 2015

your inner voice also helps one to improve. nice comparison for our soul, conscience, to the beautiful bird. You my Nightingale, my mystery call You the ballast of my creativity very meaning words. it is your strength, courage, that help us get to our aim

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 21 June 2015

a nice way of listening to your inner soul. this will shed all negativity.You my Nightingale, my mystery call You the ballast of my creativity You the question from all You the medal of my privity i love the above lines. the first line in this stanza is very meaningful

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