Hello?
Are you there?
This place is dark and cold,
and i'm getting really scared.
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Sad to say, everyone has this voice, we just have to try to ignore it and not go to far. But im not one to talk... The trafesty in this poem is very dreadful, yet expressed really well. Im proud, keep it up :)
I think that Howlin' Dervish only has two stock comments, one being the one he left below (he left the same for one of my own poems) . Good write!