Sunday, October 11, 2015

The Voice Comments

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Inside me there is this voice
That seeks to end all choice

It tells me I'm no good
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Noah Body
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Kim Barney 11 October 2015

Don't listen to the voice. You're better than the voice tells you. Well written.

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Tony Karas 11 October 2015

Thank you. The voice is strident and hard to resist. But I try.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 October 2015

The voice and, the choice! With the mus eof life. Nice piece.

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Tony Karas 11 October 2015

Thank you.

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