The Voice Comments
I was walking away from the mirror,
I was walking away from my shadow,
I wanted to fade away in terror,
I listened to my sky and its bellow..
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Anirbit - There are many who would comment with negativity, forgive them like a true poet that you are! Just excuse their innocence, as they know not what poetry is. Like Nalini, Padma & Lawrence said before me, your imagery are fantastic and they are appreciable. Just go ahead and do not stop writing for us here. A 10 here for your talent.
as the great ravitej once said - 'its a crime, not to have a rhyme'
A fantastic beautiful read! The images are terrific! I'm jealous...LOL. I wish that 'Voice' had been mine! Nice, Anirbit. L
Anirbit...looks like a spiritual experience unless it is just poetic imagination...hope it helps you write great poetry...this is a very good poem...with good flow and content... Welcome to PH...love...nalini
Anirbit....That is a grand entry poem....It takes wings and soars! ! The imagery and your thought process is deep and resonates. Welcome to PH! ! And a resounding 10. TO
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9/10/2025 4:51:41 PM # 1.0.0
What a powerful entry to peomhunter. welcoem Anirbit! ~ lovely poem, and i would want to say that 'mere rhyme does not make poetry'! keep writing! Preets