The Voice 2 Comments

I will explain everything to you in detail sir

I could take the the first stanza at 'face value', and I kind of liked the whole poem even without understanding it. bri : )

I'd much rather read a poem in which the message/story is straightforward **, though many readers may 'eat up/enjoy' your poem.

I assume you are using symbolism, which I rarely try to use and often don't recognize (as symbolism) or understand. Your PH bio states that you are 'A visionary icon and mystic, philosopher, '

This is too much of a mystery for me. But, welcome to PH. bri

A concise and insightful verse. A beautiful creation