The Visitor Comments

I like the frivolity of this poem, its fast pace, changes of mood and tone, and interchange between the participants, and sudden remarks. Opulent wonder is a fascinating idea about love. Suit and facemask fit in well with the concept and message of the poem.

This was magnificent. I have never used that word before in my comments. You go right to the top of my list of prose writers. I gave it a ten. I'm putting it on my favorites list and I hope to eventually read every piece you listed.Thanks, I just love it. GW62

The poem says it all.

Dorothy, I'll stick with the chocolates all the time. Seriously though, this is a beautiful piece that expresses so much. I loved the line about painting him in the corner. This poems say it all for me. The hint of jealousy that come through on the final stanza. Brilliant. 10/10 from me and thanks for sharing it. David