Saturday, November 12, 2016

The Visitor Comments

Rating: 5.0

French panes stir with rays of morning's ebullience.
Then light awoke and tiptoed over slender glass
Nibbling its lenses with gold flakes & honey rime
til Blue jays chorused. The prologue of a fretful day
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Mj Lemon 26 November 2016

Fantastic! There's something here that reminds me of Robert Frost. Maybe it really never is too late to go back and take the road we missed the first time. A great poem.

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