Friday, February 6, 2009

The Visit (A Gothic Love Story) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me feel your love before it's too late
Let me feel your touch before day breaks
Let me feel your warmth before the sun comes down
Tomorrow I'll be gone
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Sonya Florentino
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Patti Masterman 07 October 2009

I'm in love too now; perhaps love is viral in the written word, and now there is no cure, and we are all bound to die, in the end, so might as well die in love, and have some happiness..Sonya your poems are so very inspiring!

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Laurie Hill 08 June 2009

I agree with Kandis.....such a wistful, powerful write, passionate and very beautiful in its yearning for love to give you your reason for living...i like this immensely............10++++++++

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Estrella Baldemosa 06 February 2009

wow! all you need are notes to make this poem into a beautiful song.

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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