Tuesday, January 12, 2010

The Visit Comments

Rating: 5.0

we have no patience to wait
the mechanics move too slow for us
it’s as much as anything
but the chance not to give up...
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lady grace
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Antonio Liao 25 January 2010

I could not even close my eyes...as I read this wonderful poem.....it refresh through the whole day works....so stream in the vessel of rest....thank for the words...God bless my dear friend... a 10 +++

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Eyan Desir 13 January 2010

I think there is something wrong in the 4 th line Little lady... But this poem makes me think it must be something personal anyway good write keep been happy.....

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Ravi Sathasivam 12 January 2010

Nice thoughts Well penned Enjoyed 10+

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